Monday, February 20, 2012

Mel's All Faculty Critique 2

Here are some of the main points that were discussed:
-disconnect between the use of photo and vector. Possible use color or texture to create separation and to fill the deadspace
-the color palette is off and needs to be more cohesive throughout entire project
-The "u" in the logo is a little off and needs to be revisited as well as think about the dark circle border. Perhaps use a complimentary color.
-Good variety in ride choice and branding for those.
-Look at the tshirts again and decide which you want on front/back
-Find a solution for the layout on the back of the park map... There is a lot of competition for visual hierarchy. Need to make it flow better and easier to read.
For display, consider where you put your three ride signs and tshirts.

Overall, I think you are in a good spot with your project and you have a good amount finished! Keep it up, Mel. :)

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